I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Casey, I love your blog post about horses and all the different kinds and different colours. Maybe next time you could add some facts about all the different horses and you could tell us if you have any horses.
Kia Ora Casey, I really like this blog post! It's really cool. Maybe next time you could add more slides about horses. Was this in free time? di you make this for fun? Blog you later
Kai ora Casey,Acasia here This blog post is very cool and interesting especially the first one because I did not know it. Maybe next time you could explain the different house and add some facts but the blog post itself is very good. Good job! :)
Heya Casey! Great Job! I didn't know there was a type called a Chestnut Horse! Next time you could add information that tells us about their personality. But great work! Shyla
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Kia Ora Casey,
ReplyDeleteI love your blog post about horses and all the different kinds and different colours.
Maybe next time you could add some facts about all the different horses and you could tell us if you have any horses.
Blog you later
Kia Ora Casey,
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post! It's really cool.
Maybe next time you could add more slides about horses.
Was this in free time? di you make this for fun? Blog you later
Kai ora Casey,Acasia here
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is very cool and interesting especially the first one because I did not know it. Maybe next time you could explain the different house and add some facts but the blog post itself is very good. Good job! :)
Hi there KIan here i like your blog by the way maybe you could explain what sort of breeds of horses there are but i like the horses though bye .
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ReplyDeleteEthan these are cool horses i like the white one how its ran out the frog its tail is wel it around
Heya Casey!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job! I didn't know there was a type called a Chestnut Horse! Next time you could add information that tells us about their personality. But great work!
Shyla
hey casey
ReplyDeletewow I love horses to its cool that some one even cares about our horses
maybe next time you can write more about them .
bye
Hi Casey. It's Levi. I like the types of horses you have on this. Maybe next time put some writing in there so you can tell us more about it.
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