I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Casey, it's Michaela, from Hornby Primary School. I like your blog post you did. I like that you put your writing in your slide show. Maybe next time you can work on your punctuation and rereading it again. But anyway it is a good blog post. Bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Casey, it's Michaela, from Hornby Primary School. I like your blog post you did. I like that you put your writing in your slide show. Maybe next time you can work on your punctuation and rereading it again. But anyway it is a good blog post. Bye!
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