I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ewwww poo. I'm glad I wasn't around when that poop was run over. Next time you do some writing, think about the punctuation you should use and capital letters. That would make it easier for your audience to read.
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Ewwww poo. I'm glad I wasn't around when that poop was run over.
ReplyDeleteNext time you do some writing, think about the punctuation you should use and capital letters. That would make it easier for your audience to read.